Novel?

Subject: Novel? Thu Jun 24, 2010 1:31 am

1:20 AM - Vir | §YN |: Earth was on the brink of destruction due to dying resources, destructin of land, etc etc
1:21 AM - Vir | §YN |: And two meteors which was thought to be the finishing touch to it actually restored Earth back to its previous point where trees grew and such.
1:21 AM - Syn | Loki: so they had sentiient life on the meteors?
1:22 AM - Vir | §YN |: The meteors' minerals also provided new resources but there was this also this once substance insid ehte meteor which was hazardous to humans raw but concentrated could enhance human's genetic structure.
1:22 AM - Vir | §YN |: The meteors were "gifts from God".
1:22 AM - Vir | §YN |: Or some shit.
1:22 AM - Vir | §YN |: or a second chance.
1:23 AM - Vir | §YN |: So then two companies named PURGE and ANGEL harvested these meteors
1:23 AM - Vir | §YN |: But then when PURGE realized the concentrated substance could enhance human's genetic structure they decided to test humans and to take over the world and capture the other meteor.
1:24 AM - Vir | §YN |: The meteor's success rate to enhance human's structure was only 10%.
1:24 AM - Syn | Loki: sounds cool so far
1:24 AM - Vir | §YN |: Then ANGEL started their own comeback in an effort to protect the people fromt eh tyranny of PURGE but letting people volunteer to be exposed to the meteor's concentrated substance.
1:24 AM - Vir | §YN |: The main character joined ANGEL but before that he was kidnapped by PURGE during a raid and exposed to the substance.
1:25 AM - Vir | §YN |: Throughout the novel he finds his best friend whom dies almost immediately.
1:25 AM - Vir | §YN |: And that builds into his character.
1:25 AM - Vir | §YN |: When it gets more indepth into the story the main character also find conspiracies about ANGEL.
1:25 AM - Vir | §YN |: Like how they would hold off a rescue mission for the situatino to get worse.
1:25 AM - Vir | §YN |: So they'll seem like a bigger hero when they execute the mission.
1:26 AM - Vir | §YN |: So when the main character finds out the only reason to stop this chaos and war for land is to destroy both meteors he goes rogue and tries to destroy both meteors.
1:26 AM - Syn | Loki: how big is the novel so faR?
1:26 AM - Vir | §YN |: 31 pages.
1:26 AM - Vir | §YN |: He hasn't gone rogue yet. Very Happy

1:27 AM - Syn | Loki: lol
1:27 AM - Syn | Loki: how long you think it'll be?
1:27 AM - Vir | §YN |: He meets this girl in the beginning whom he falls in love with but her whole family and all of her friends were killed during a raid int he novel.
1:27 AM - Vir | §YN |: So she joins ANGEL and becomes exposed to the meteor concentrated substance and lives.
1:28 AM - Vir | §YN |: But when the main character goes rogue he has to fight her because she still works for ANGEL.
1:28 AM - Vir | §YN |: A lot of people die in there.
1:28 AM - Vir | §YN |: it's mostly about corruption of power.
1:28 AM - Vir | §YN |: And how even if one person tries to change the world.
1:29 AM - Vir | §YN |: It won't happen because he's only one person.
1:29 AM - Vir | §YN |: And how the more power you have the power control you have over people.

If anyone's interested I'll e-mail them the whole 32 pages and growing. Smile

Subject: Re: Novel? Thu Jun 24, 2010 9:31 am

i might be intersted, e-mail me it anyway

Subject: Re: Novel? Thu Jun 24, 2010 9:35 am

I'll need your e-mail sir.

Subject: Re: Novel? Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:24 pm

c13intz@aol.com
i thought i had it on my profile, guess not Razz

Subject: Re: Novel? Thu Jun 24, 2010 5:04 pm

Shit, I just sent the novel but forgot to say it was from me. My email is ezhou1992@gmail.com

Subject: Re: Novel? Fri Jun 25, 2010 1:08 am

kinda feels like Bioshock, I'd put my 144 pages of my book on here but I havent typed em yet

Subject: Re: Novel? Fri Jun 25, 2010 4:43 pm