MärvïN
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Gender : Posts : 437 Rep : 11 Age : 35 Location : Clinton Twp, Michigan
| Subject: The "Complete a Story" Thread. Sun Jan 24, 2010 4:34 am | |
| To start off with, the rules are simple.
- One person makes 'Minimum' 4-7 lines of story. (Paragraph or So, depending on quality of it, perhaps more.)
- The next person picks up where the last left off, in their own way of course.
- - The end, I will edit this post with the final story.
Story #1 (If you don't know, these "spoiler" areas are click able and save posting space.)
- Spoiler:
The rain pours down from the night sky, thunder cracks with a large boom as lightning brightens up the horizon. As the team of specialized individuals walks into the dense growth of ferns and bushes. It begins to come down even harder, smacking the leaves with such force that it sounds as if firecrackers were going off around them. The lead hacks branches away, swinging the gleaming machete back and forth, making a 'woosh' and then 'thwap' sound with each pass. Suddenly there is movement heard, the team freezes as the machete wielding man slowly lowers his hat, and peers into the darkness...
- Spoiler:
As his eyes gleam into the darkness two big flashes of lights burst in the air. The light is so bright that there is no sound in the sky besides the ringing in the teams ears. "Get down men! its a ambush!" he says to his team. After a few seconds go by, he then snaps out of it realizing it was only a glimpse of what happened in his past...
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Sh1fTy'
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Gender : Posts : 23 Rep : 7 Age : 33 Location : Mt. Clemens, Mi
| Subject: Re: The "Complete a Story" Thread. Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:03 am | |
| Its not the best but at least i tried... - Spoiler:
As his eyes gleam into the darkness two big flashes of lights burst in the air. The light is so bright that there is no sound in the sky besides the ringing in the teams ears. "Get down men! its a ambush!" he says to his team. After a few seconds go by, he then snaps out of it realizing it was only a glimpse of what happened in his past...
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